You stayed at a hotel recently and forgot your clothes there. Write a
letter to the hotel manager and say
– When and where did you stay?
– Describe your clothes.
– What would you like the manager to do about it?
Hello sir,
I am writing to inform you that I forgot my clothes at your Milton Hills
hotel. My name is kishan Patel and I booked a hotel for mere single day
with my whole family. We were going Scarborough to Cambridge. My room
number was 706 which is located on 7th floor.
I need your assistance for finding my clothes and I will give you my
clothes appearance so its easy to recognize you. I left a whole medium size
bag with clothes. Its has 3 underwear, shirts and pants. If you can check,
you can find all underwear is in the same colour as well as shirts are in
different colour: white,blue and black. Finally, about pants, only 2 pants
in the bag with blue jeans and black formal pant.
I would like to keep all my stuff on the side at receptionist desk. I am
coming back on next week so I will take it from there.
I hope you will understand and will attain positive reply from your side
and I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Kishan Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello sir, I am writing to inform you that I forgot...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I forgot my clothes at your Milton Hills hotel. My name is kishan Patel and I boo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hotel
...got my clothes at your Milton Hills hotel. My name is kishan Patel and I booked a...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and I booked a hotel for mere single day with my whole family. We were going Scar...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: With
... booked a hotel for mere single day with my whole family. We were going Scarboro...
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Line 6, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... going Scarborough to Cambridge. My room number was 706 which is located on 7th f...
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Suggestion: Number
...g Scarborough to Cambridge. My room number was 706 which is located on 7th floor. ...
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Line 10, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inding my clothes and I will give you my clothes appearance so its easy to recogn...
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Suggestion: Clothes
...g my clothes and I will give you my clothes appearance so its easy to recognize you...
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Line 12, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ecognize you. I left a whole medium size bag with clothes. Its has 3 underwear, s...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Bag
...ize you. I left a whole medium size bag with clothes. Its has 3 underwear, shir...
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Line 14, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ear, shirts and pants. If you can check, you can find all underwear is in the sam...
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Line 16, column 74, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the same colour as well as shirts are in different colour: white,blue and black. ...
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Suggestion: Different
...me colour as well as shirts are in different colour: white,blue and black. Finally, ...
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Line 18, column 24, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , blue
...irts are in different colour: white,blue and black. Finally, about pants, only 2...
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Line 18, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lack. Finally, about pants, only 2 pants in the bag with blue jeans and black for...
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Suggestion: In
... Finally, about pants, only 2 pants in the bag with blue jeans and black forma...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f on the side at receptionist desk. I am coming back on next week so I will take ...
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Line 24, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Coming
...the side at receptionist desk. I am coming back on next week so I will take it fro...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ext week so I will take it from there. I hope you will understand and will att...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill attain positive reply from your side and I look forward to hearing from you i...
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Line 29, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ttain positive reply from your side and I look forward to hearing from you in t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ture. Yours faithfully, Kishan Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53439153439 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29993859333 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645502645503 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.737206508 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9230769231 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255265459787 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787574244282 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856126473893 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827966141539 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710237732517 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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