Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A little retrospection would reveal and history has been witnessed that modern communication totally changed as compare to past time. Although the trend of email and messaging have reduced the amount of time which people spend seeing their near and dear. In this essay, I do not endorse this statement and I will discuss both viewpoints in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, numerous merits are associated to this phenomenon. The most prominent is, as in face paced era, there is lack of time to meet our friends more frequently. As a result, with the help of internet they can communicate with their friends and family members who lived far away from them. Not only this, he modern communication can improve human social life since it can share many different types of information. Thus it is fruitful for people to communicate by email and messaging.
Nevertheless, there are also few demerits of this trend. The first and foremost is, people can be individualism because they are solely hectic in their social messaging. For example, in mean time, numerous human beings always focus on their gadgets to keep in touch with their friends in another place when they meet up. As a result, mankind ignore what is happens with their surroundings.
To conclude, I firmly believe, undoubtedly, modern communication has changed human’s conversation style which is bone for our society. However, there are few demerits of this trend, which are unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15062761506 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81681023777 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 139.433497537 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623430962343 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4557222933 50.4703680194 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289936948387 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940041742207 0.0925447433944 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802452781441 0.071462118173 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171102538446 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914694996573 0.0609392437508 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.5 Out of 90
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