Many people believe that sports are not good for the children, because they are not focus on the academic performance properly when involved in playing sports. But, these days in corporate world teamwork and discipline are one of the most prominent preferences and employees have to follow the rules and regulation. If they do not follow the rules and regulation then they get fired. Therefore, sports is one of the best possible options to learn the rules. That’s the reason, I agree with the statement, play are very mandatory in children’s life, because it teaches many lessons like fair play, team work, discipline, determination etc.
First, in any play, all the participant should play fairly and treat other players with respect. For example, my university teams were playing cricket during the play one of the players provoke other team players in a tournament. that's why teammet got angry and fought with opposite team members on the field. after this incident both team are banned and could not play longer. From this example, we can learn how you lose your respect when you not play fairly. Whether you lose or win, you should always appreciate the other team members and thanks them.
Secondly, teamwork is very important skills in a human life. Everyone should respect team members,their ideas and support each other. For example, In my Indian cricket team, all the players support each other and do not get jealous from one another. That's why in World Cup tournament 2019, Indian team has able to win all the matches till now.
Last but not least, sport is best to learn disciplines or follow the rule in the children. All the games have rules. Player should must follow the rules. If they do not follow the rules, they get penalized or may be removed from the team. Discipline teaches us how to work within a system.
From the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that sports reach a lot. Participation can help to develop responsibility, respect to other which is used in personal and professional life as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95965417867 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5474395897 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547550432277 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3445261191 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2272727273 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24628034142 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652329801406 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539688686294 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123915122831 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748404071053 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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