Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies? Use specific examples and details to support your response
Most people think that films are the cause of the deterioration of the culture. It may be the reason for mixing cultures; because in film making the director try to catch the broad range of audience. Despite many negative consequences, in my opinion, the film tells a lot more about the country where made.
First and foremost, most of the cast of that film is from the country where they made. Cast skin color, accent, clothing style, body feature, etc reflect the country and culture vibe. For example, Slumdog Milliner is one of the Oscar-winning films of India, which is directed by the foreign director. But the casts are from the Indian origin; their clothing style and casts both reflect the Indian culture.
secondly, storylines are other examples that reflect the culture. For instance, In India, child labor, child marriage, Sati Pratha are common in all reasons, which do not find in another country. Therefore, a story based on this topic will show how some of the customs are against people's basic rights in Indian culture. In addition to this, In Hindi Flims, all sense is very bright and colorful.People are always displaying as either dancing or singing as per the situation. Which reflects how much dancing and singing are important in Indian culture.
Finally, the Location of shooting is enough to tell a lot more about the country. For example, movies show rain, drought, snow, desert, etc which reflect the geographical condition of that country. For example, Mnajhi The Mountain Man one of the renown movies of India. In this movie display the mountain and drought area, In this movie, Women ha to bring water to cross the mountain their this no road to cross the mountain. So many accidents happen such as the main actor's wife falling from the mountain and died. As a result, the actor makes the road to cut the mountain stones using simple tools alone. This example tells, how geographical condition of that reason and effect on the people, how people had to work hard to fulfill the basic need.
Form the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that Films tell a lot more about that country such as about the people, geographical condition and culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89008042895 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41770144548 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525469168901 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7879749201 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186770029081 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617069175598 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848363413186 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125217370166 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755258715597 0.0645574589148 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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