The number of people who are at a risk of serious health problems due to overweight is increasing.What are the reason of increasing number of overweight people in society?How can this problem be solved?
The number of individuals who are at risk of serious health problems due to obesity is increasing day by day.The reasons and solutions behind this situation will be discussed in impending paragraphs.
To begin with,everything comes with a cost.There are mainly two reasons behind health problems due to obesity.Primarily, due to hectic schedule people prefer to eat junk food which is easily available in market.Junk food is fried food and made with chemicals.It is the main reason of high blood pressure and cholestrol.Moreover,due to sedentary lifestyle people are totally depend on machines than doing work manually.They use vehicles and other things which are make life easy.These machines make people lazy and it led to obesity.
However,every lock has a key.There are main two solutions to overcome the overweight.Firstly,government should aware people by conducting awareness camps.Authority should discuss advantages of healthy lifestyle which overcome the health problems.Secondly,people should eat organic food which made with vegetables and fat-free ingredients.If anyone have no time to cook food by itself then they prefer to eat fat-free things like pizza that made without refined flour.
In conclusion,there are several reasons behind serious health problems due to obesity.These health problems will overcome not only by awareness of healthy lifestyle but also by consumption of organic food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75714285714 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.90366128507 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.529689763 49.4020404114 305% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 302.25 106.682146367 283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.5 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.5 7.06120827912 375% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266309240037 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179902210849 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946471367881 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179902210849 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946471367881 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.9 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.78 50.2224549098 4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.02 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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