The number of people who are at a risk of serious health problems due to overweight is increasing.What are the reason of increasing number of overweight people in the society?How can this problem be solved?
The number of individuals who are in danger because of serious health problems due to obesity. reason behind increasing number of overweight people in the community and counter measures to solve this problem will be discussed in impending paragraphs.
To begin with, there are mainly two reason behind growing number of overweight people . Firstly, people are doing more jobs for more earnings and because of this hectic schedule they do not have enough time to cook food them self. people prefer to eat convenience food which is easily available ,since, these type of food contain chemicals that leads to obesity problems. Secondly, people are living sedentary lifestyle and engaging too much time in task that expend very little energy. people are totally depend on machines rather than doing manual work.
However, there are two main solutions to tackle this problem. Primarily, government should conduct health awareness campaigns that guide people about the effect of obesity on health and ways to fight against it. people should be encourage to do regular exercise and this might be done by offering free gym sessions by authorities. Moreover, people should do regular physical activities that will help in digesting food easily. In addition to this people should eat organic or healthy food which contain low calories.
In conclusion, consumption of junk food and lack of physical activities are main reasons of increasing number of health problems due to obesity. Efforts should be made by government as well as people themselves to control health problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.296 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54211990534 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1127134314 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389681056613 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141078408492 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105638640941 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281420648326 0.151304729494 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140207321995 0.056905535591 246% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.