The initial pie chart illustrates the percentage of energy utilized in a usually Australian home while the later chart represents the various ways in which the generated energy is emitted in form of greenhouse gas.
Overall, energy used in form of heat including water heating tremendously outnumbered other means of energy generation. Similarly, energy released from other household appliances in Australia demonstrated a significant increase whereas energy produced from cooling is almost equal to that evaporated.
In terms of energy consumption, heating alone occupies 42% with boiling water being the second highest (30%). Other appliances scored 15% with use of fridges and freezers having 7%. The least is cooling (2%) and lighting (4%).
In contrast, home appliances took the lead in gas emission having a considerable increase (28%). Lighting and cooling followed a similar trend as in the first chart (3% and 8% respectively).
- In there advertising business is nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way Why is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 78
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 96
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...freezers having 7%. The least is cooling 2% and lighting 4%. In contrast, hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, similarly, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93328598447 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0729156444 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313348442578 0.215688989381 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109606699587 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0751077178781 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170004071664 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678141935489 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.