Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money. Write a letter to the local council.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in respect to your proposed closure of the sports and leisure facilities in our community due to financial issues. I would like you to please reconsider your decision because this centre is very essential to all the members of area.
Firstly, I and my family use this facility to exercise on a daily basis, my parents usually play table tennis together every Saturday morning before going shopping for the family. In addition, my sister also likes to swim at the centre swimming pool to prepare her for regional swimming competition coming up next month.
Needless to say, most youths also use this place as a meeting point to relax and have fun, the senior citizens too comes to exercise and play with their friends and family members.
However, should the local council proceed with the centre closure, it will have a detrimental effects on individuals and the entire community. Most people live a sedentary lifestyles and this is the only functional gym in the area. It will likely endanger our health due to increase in overweight related diseases. It is also a place of bonding for all the members of the community.
I hope you will have a rethink about your decisions.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Jane.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92018779343 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52371764302 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629107981221 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6291413499 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2727272727 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123324345128 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441248446281 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556374247282 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.058524081737 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520779373039 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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