you recently lost your driving license and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.•How important the license is to you•Asking how he/she found it•Saying how you would love to thank him/her

Essay topics:

you recently lost your driving license and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
• How important the license is to you
• Asking how he/she found it
• Saying how you would love to thank him/her

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to express my deep gratitude to you, who has my driving licence and just send back to me through post office.

Last week, I went to visit the city zoo with my wife and son and my driving might be lost somewhere during this time, I was spend the whole week to suffer with this situation, I could not driving myself to work every daily basic and I have to take the bus instead, which was very inconvenience for me because either bus station and my office are very far from my house and I have been to the company often the whole week.

I wonder, How could you have got my driving lisence ? and where have you got it ? is it in the city zoo ? anyway, I appreciate for what you have done, I would like to say thank a lot to you and wish all the best will come to you and your family.

One again, thanks and love you,

Sincerely your,
Rocky Stone

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to you to expre...
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Line 4, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... lost somewhere during this time, I was spend the whole week to suffer with this situ...
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Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'drive'
Suggestion: drive
...suffer with this situation, I could not driving myself to work every daily basic and I ...
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Line 6, column 55, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...could you have got my driving lisence ? and where have you got it ? is it in the ci...
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Line 6, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...g lisence ? and where have you got it ? is it in the city zoo ? anyway, I apprecia...
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Line 6, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anyway
...ve you got it ? is it in the city zoo ? anyway, I appreciate for what you have done, I...
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Line 8, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ily. One again, thanks and love you, Sincerely your, Rocky Stone
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thanks and love you, Sincerely your, Rocky Stone
^^^
Line 11, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you, Sincerely your, Rocky Stone
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12994350282 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00045519511 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.802518764 44.8134815571 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.428571429 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260352891319 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150667553603 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940837590121 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194370506635 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109239501486 0.0580467560999 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.97 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.0 8.62886597938 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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