YOUR NEIGHBOR HAS RECENTLY WRITTEN TO YOU A COMPLAIN ABOUT THE NOISE FROM YOUR FLAT/HOUSE.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologize
• describe what action you will take
Hi james,
I am writing this letter to regard to the letter I have just receive from james yesterday and I would like to apologise about the sound of machine run come from my house recently.
As you has known that my son is studying mechanic in Northway University, now he and some his friends are joining with our town science fair which will be hold in next week. Therefore, they are taking his room as a camp site to test the machine which they are just creating. it’s making some noisy when it run even sometime it is explosion and cause some terribly noisy.
I am really sorry for any inconvenience cause by this matter, I will try my best to help them avoiding to make noise and I promise it will be stopped when the fair is on.
Once again, apologizing for that cause and hope you all well.
have good weekend
Cheerful,
Stone
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It&apos
...e machine which they are just creating. it's making some noisy when it run even so...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'runs'?
Suggestion: runs
...ng. it's making some noisy when it run even sometime it is explosion and cause...
^^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to avoid' or 'avoid'.
Suggestion: to avoid; avoid
...matter, I will try my best to help them avoiding to make noise and I promise it will be ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Have
...or that cause and hope you all well. have good weekend Cheerful, Stone
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, therefore, well, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51923076923 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29127888058 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679487179487 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2027801725 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126509709207 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503948033651 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430294176047 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826477490975 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289009827291 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.