Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
it would be argued by some that advertisement promotes people to purchase something which are even no useful for buyer. others, however, believe that advertising have such tools inform consumers about newly launched products that can beneficial their life. I personally agree with the second group.
On the one hand, the reason why people believe that advertising would not bring any values for consumers but it even makes people to buy things which are not necessary for them. Because the advertising always shows up the attractive beautiful of products, especially it is on going the promotion and the price is very cheap, exciting the consumers to assume that it is a good time to buy it, for instance, The TV are showing the promotion program of the electric cooker with many new modern feature and deeply reduce price during launching time, there are a lot of audiences thinks that a good time to buy it but they are really forget that they already have two electric cookers with two different size and they are no need electric cooker in their kitchen for the long time anymore.
On the other hand, I would argue that advertisements is great information for the consumers. In particular, such tools inform consumers about newly launched products with innovative feature that can improve their life. This can be illustrated by well-known smart phone brands such as Apple and Samsung who have big budgets for marketing and promotion. These campaigns keep customers updated about what is available in the market, so they can make proper purchase decision.
In conclusion, although some people think that advertisements attracted customers to buy the products which are even really does not need, I personally believe that advertising is a good fast information to inform to consumption about new products with new feature that may useful for their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07817589577 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64853898919 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511400651466 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.752528434 49.4020404114 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.9 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242953776726 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106484423883 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727615365376 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169926799125 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610134837843 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.