YOUR NEIGHBOR HAS RECENTLY WRITTEN TO YOU A COMPLAIN ABOUT THE NOISE FROM YOUR FLAT/HOUSE.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologize
• describe what action you will take
Dear Barbara,
I am very shocked to learn from your letter that the noise from my flat has been a source of disturbance for you and it has spoiled your evening and causing distress. I am utterly regretful for that. I had no idea that the noise would reach your flat and cause you trouble. Please accept my sincere apology and I assure you that I will be more careful from now on.
As you may have guessed, I am trying to refit my kitchen in the evening when I get back from my office. Unfortunately, it is taking longer than expected and I have had problems with getting things to fit properly. The banging and hammering must have created the cacophony and I should have been more cautious.
As the kitchen work is still not finished, I have decided to call a professional after reading your letter. I will instruct him to keep the noise level as least as possible and the work should be done in the next two or three days. I will make sure he works only in daytime hours, so you won't be disturbed in the evening again.
I am really sorry to have caused you the problem.
Yours sincerely,
Gorner Brek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tress. I am utterly regretful for that. I had no idea that the noise would reach ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t be disturbed in the evening again. I am really sorry to have caused you the ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41062801932 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33749541278 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2219536517 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0833333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300129900729 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108609662541 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988286897387 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155474260116 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133784786182 0.0580467560999 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.