The users of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Before the existence of public networks, meeting face-to-face was the best way to express not only people’s emotion but also the simplest way to strengthen interpersonal relationships and connecting individuals with others. But with the increasingly building up of social site, we can all consensus that those websites bring back more benefits than the minor disadvantages have been amplified in recent years.
It is significant that social media erase both geographical and social status barriers. Chief among that is to provide several work opportunities, especially improve the employability skills for the adolescents, who usually have smaller social circle and insufficient in sense of identity, as well as offer a safe platform for people to develop their online reputation and internet career. For example, a teenager is getting along with his peers, who inhabit a thousand miles away from him and in the same time as he is facetiming with his mate, he can still handle hundreds of orders from his potential customers, broadcast his consume media, regardless of the long distance. There is no need to wasting time on going across the country or direct meetings.
Conversely, many people, mainly adults argue that young people are getting more and more introvert than the prior generations and tend to be less confident. In addition, they conclude that the confusingly rising obesity rate and other physical and mental illness is the most obvious drawback of over-reliance in cyberspace as internet users are less likely to go outside to meet other people. Albeit those negative impressions are becoming more popular amongst the adult, I must state that those bad impacts happened in just a small portion and the positive side of socializing without using conventional way to keep in touch has been avoided by the misconceived judges.
To conclude, although the lack in real communication and risky to users, the use of social media is infinite and still have more aspects to be harnessed.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-01 | linhhhoang | 89 | view |
| 2018-04-01 | kookiiejeon | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 711, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...tance. There is no need to wasting time on going across the country or direct meetings. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, so, still, then, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28037383178 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90763870287 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657320872274 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5378051045 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.5 106.682146367 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110083910766 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424801291698 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422179473705 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652303402611 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359511642024 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.