You noticed a room at your company office that can be used as a relaxation room. Write a letter to your manager and ask to use the room for this purpose. In your letter, Explain why you are suggesting this Which room it is What changes in the room will need to be done
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to the room, which is vacant since last year.
Since you have never seen this branch of your office, so you might have millions of questions running through in your why I was talking about this room? Although the facilities provided by your officer are very good, due to shifting work home employees need rest for some time. Further, some workers continue the shift for 16 hours per day, but no space provided them to take rest in break time. Therefore, their efficiency goes down in the last period of the day.
The room, whom about I am talking to you is located near the canteen of our officer on the first floor. it is 8000 square feet, has four windows as well as furnished with beautiful wooden work. Along with these, it has a proper supply of electricity.
Still, it requires some changes such as there are no fans and the windows are jammed. Not only we need a bed, but also we need some mattresses to rest.
If this is done, then I shall be very thankful to you.
Looking forward to your prompt response.
Yours sincerely
Amanpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...teen of our officer on the first floor. it is 8000 square feet, has four windows a...
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Line 7, column 54, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fans'?
Suggestion: fans
...uires some changes such as there are no fan and the windows are jammed. Not only we...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dows are jammed. Not only we need a bed, but also we need some mattresses to rest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, well, such as, talking about, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5495049505 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20012052855 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1358233806 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6923076923 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 4.34317383033 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307186365943 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900291374186 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100206459077 0.0603063233224 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142517835642 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993040073002 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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