The first below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household.The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The first pie chart gives information about the proportion of uses of energy in six categories. And the second one shows the percentage of household greenhouse gas emissions in six ways in Australia.
It is noticeable that the most energy is used in heating, and cooling accounts for the least proportion of energy. And the greenhouse gas mainly come from water heating and other appliances.
In an average Australian household, 42% of the energy is used in heating, followed by water heating which consumes 30% of the energy. 7%, 4%, and 2% of the total energy is used on refrigeration, cooling and lighting respectively. In addition, other appliances also make up 15% of the total amount of energy.
In terms of greenhouse gas emissions, water heating is the primary source of greenhouse gas, which emits 32% of the total. Nearly 15% of the greenhouse gas is from heating and 14% derives from refrigeration. Besides, lighting and cooling only produce 8% and 3% of the greenhouse gas. Also, 28% of the greenhouse gas is produced by other appliances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91779331464 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8853620296 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4545454545 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35019958341 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132248179996 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653790766515 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2159837466 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638881647818 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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