people are leaving villages to live in cities.what are the reasons?Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Undoutedly,lifestyle has undergone drastic change over a couple of decades.Presently,it can be seen that several individuals are migrating to cities for plethora of reasons.so this essay intends to elaborate the causes along with the pros and cons of the given tendency.
There are multifarious reasons liable for this trend.One can go on to the list,few of them are discussed below.
First and the foremost factor that encourages people to live in big cities is more employment opportunities as mostly mega cities are densly populated and in order to cater the needs of citizens,establishment of factories and industries is thriving,which in turn,demands more workers.Thus,it highly contributes in moving towards cities by leaving countrisides.Furthermore, masses also prefer to live in urban areas because of availability of inevitable fundamental requirements such as better education,better healthcare and so on.To elaborate,these services are much pleasent in cities as compared to rural areas.Thence,it tends the people to move towards urban areas in order to avail these.
It has manifold advantages.To begin with,by following this trend masses may relish a high level of standard of living.Because,by becoming nine to fivers,individuals are more likely to earn handsome money and so does the transformation in lifestyle.
On the other hand,some disadvantages are associated with it.To commence with,it is the prominent culprit behind a explosion in urban population as migration is growing day by day,which,can bring futuristic problems.Congestion on roads,increase in pollution and simultaneously,rise in crime.Hence,it may bring enormous hindrances in development of that area.
To conclude,it is evident from to the above interperation that this tendency may have some negative aspects.However,these are not enough to edge over its positive repercussins
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90774907749 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.22693364537 2.80592935109 151% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.086342466 49.4020404114 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.833333333 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.1666666667 20.7667163134 217% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8333333333 7.06120827912 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0611564220678 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0239844162341 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294274924593 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0239844162341 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294274924593 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.0 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.42 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.89 12.4159519038 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.64 8.58950901804 136% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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