Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Human activities have created a serious impact on global ecology which is the shelter of wild animals and plants. In my viewpoint, there are a mountain of causes resulting in an ecological crisis and biodiversity loss. Habitat destruction and environmental pollution are two of them.
As a matter of fact, the earth’s biodiversity is under threat due to a cascade of factors. However, it is believed habitat destruction to be the main cause. In this modernised era, human invasion in order to broaden their farmland and dwelling are extremely increasing on account of overpopulation. In clarification, nature exploitation leads to serious deforestation that make the physically large species become homeless. Besides, the transformation of natural area not only determines wild animals but also negatively affects vegetable species which are main food resources of both humans and animals. Therefore, wildlife habitats are in danger and the balance of ecosystem exists. Another main cause is environmental pollution starting mostly from human activities. In fact, pollution contaminates air quality and water resources. Thus, thousands of animals living in poisonous area will die out every single day.
The underlying solution to biodiversity loss is promulgating environmental policies which prohibit factories from creating giant industrial dumping ground and slow the pace of deforestation. Another measure to deal with this urgent issue is wildlife conservation. To illustrate, pressure group need to work hard in raising human awareness of protecting wild species, plants and their habitats to prevent ecological crisis.
In conclusion, I believe that both governments and dwellers had better take action as soon as possible to save the earth and foster sustainable development for future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'mountains'?
Suggestion: mountains
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72693726937 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1990683343 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653136531365 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0907019408 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13748669195 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0389914060613 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399376581858 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711582160518 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418114158646 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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