Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
In my view, the leaders are the one who decides the direction of his herd. As he is responsible solely for the welfare of his team, he ought to take decisions that sometimes may not be agreeable to his jargon. Therefore, the demands on his back don’t create a successful leader rather it is his determination and skills of management that set him apart from others.
In 2017, The president of India, Mr. Modi took an audacious step of introducing the GST system of taxes up to 18 percent. The earlier Government as well as denizens of India abhor this bill but later had to adjust as the time passed. It was a new concept which took a while to understand for the general public and the businessmen. However, speaking from the country's economic point of view it was the much-needed step that increases the tax revenue which can be invested for the betterment of the nation. Later, many first world countries complimented the president on for the implementation of this bill and shook hands for the increase in business with India. After 2 years, it can be said that this has affected the economy of the nation in a positive gradient. Hence, the leader's decision is not contingent on the people's demands but rather his vision towards the nation's welfare.
When MS. dhoni was selected a the caption of the Indian Cricket Team, it was expected that he will be strengthening the existing team and take care of the games being played outside the homeland as the Indian team is prone to loose when played in other countries. This was the demand from the surplus amount of Indian fans which was taken care eventually by the caption's team management. He took some bold step to exclude the star players, such as VVS Laxman, Sehwag, Ganguly and Ashish Nehra, from the then-existing team and included much younger players whose performance was up to the mark in IPL and other county crickets. The decision was based on the fact that India was careless in terms of the fitness which undermined their performance in the games earlier. New players, although being less experienced were young, energetic and could able to take care of their physique when required in the field. However, in the beginning, many supporters, fans and former cricketers abject this bold move but were fascinated by the winning statistics delivered after the caption's decision. The Indian cricket team won T20 World cup followed by 50-50 World cup which was like the dream come true for every cricketer and the fans following the game. And it was the caption's decision, being underappreciated at first, welcomed after its consequences. Therefore, the leader decides what’s best for his team rather considering the demands of the others.
In conclusion, the aforementioned facts give a clear vision that Leaders are not created by the demands placed on their shoulders but by the actions taken after the careful perusing of the statistics.
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Can anyone rate this essay?
Can anyone rate this essay? is it possible to write only with 2 paragraph ?
Essay evaluation report
Yes, it is possible to write only with 2 paragraph, but better to have 3-4 paragraphs.
Even with 2 paragraphs, we can't only use two big examples. Need more arguments instead.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 497 350
No. of Characters: 2365 1500
No. of Different Words: 257 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.722 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.759 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.617 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 153 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.85 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.181 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.65 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.472 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...hich took a while to understand for the general public and the businessmen. However, speaking ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'a' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: a; the
...welfare. When MS. dhoni was selected a the caption of the Indian Cricket Team, it ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...homeland as the Indian team is prone to loose when played in other countries. This wa...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 824, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hough being less experienced were young, energetic and could able to take care of...
^^
Line 7, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the careful perusing of the statistics.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2426.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 496.0 442.535393258 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89112903226 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70031263847 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514112903226 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 722.7 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1947178255 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.3 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124762855171 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043381813323 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079598600633 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12543696404 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102896848125 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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