Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Education is formidable part of life and children are the future of nation. Distinguish on the basis of study must not be introduced in schools. I strongly disagree, smart pupil separate form other in order to prepare student for challenging environment. In this essay we will emphasis on the fact that every children should be treat equally.
Distinct between sharp and weak does not consider to whom advance classes should be provided. Being socialize must be taught from the primary. For example, in today era education is quite expensive, parent put their full effort to make their children well settle. If a institute does not take fees as per children capability then why in teaching way. Indirectly they are giving lesson not be socialize with the other who are not upto the mark.
Another factor, if a children is week in study teacher should pay more attention toward them to understand the thing more precisely rather than sparing them from other. For example, sometime in school teacher gave punishment like scolding and some time slapping. this should not be done.
To sum up all, i would say teacher should treat every children equally. Their mental growth is most important part of their life and it should not spoil in order to provide education to intelligent children only.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'treated'?
Suggestion: treated
... the fact that every children should be treat equally. Distinct between sharp an...
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Line 1, column 344, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...every children should be treat equally. Distinct between sharp and weak does not...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... to make their children well settle. If a institute does not take fees as per chi...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...t upto the mark. Another factor, if a children is week in study teacher should pay mor...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...t like scolding and some time slapping. this should not be done. To sum up all,...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...should not be done. To sum up all, i would say teacher should treat every ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49524596295 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626728110599 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9162262729 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109744500489 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443339025447 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389239006068 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665640738066 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480002726142 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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