As the process of urbanization, there are more and more skyscrapers built up to facilitate the increasing need for space and accommodation.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative trend?
The recent wave of immigrants moving from rural areas to more metropolitan regions has been causing an increasing number of high-rise buildings to be constructed to resolve the rising demands of accommodation. Despite the many advantages of contemporary buildings, I believe this is a negative trend in regard to prospective benefit.
From environmental perspective, the construction of skyscrapers includes million tons of steel, glass and several environmental-unfriendly materials every year. Those substances are one of the main reasons causing the increasing temperature and urban heat island (UHI) effect due to the trapped radiation in the atmosphere. On the other hand, the sealed structure of high-rise buildings could not allow it to be naturally ventilated; therefore the structure requires vast conditioning unit, which releases destructive gases into the surrounding atmosphere. Several scientific researches have been done to prove that harmful gases from air conditioning systems like CFC are the direct factors contribute to the destruction of the ozone layer and widespread impact of greenhouse effect on the Earth.
From economical point of view, contemporary buildings are putting a strain on the electric power system in the context of running out resources in maintaining habitable condition. Skyscrapers are unable to be naturally lit. Thus, energy is squandered for massive mechanical ventilation system and operating the lighting system, both to practically meet the basic life requirement and for the building to be completely functioned.
Overall, despite there is an increase in demand for contemporary buildings in order to provide accommodations for society, I would argue that this is a negative trend that would bring back several undesirable outcomes in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...he construction of skyscrapers includes million tons of steel, glass and several enviro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71268656716 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36537171447 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.675037928 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.1 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128656883531 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483354019736 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458227990368 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0867618827632 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539865690574 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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