Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, different individuals have a varied opinion about the work options. Some people prefer staying in the same job throughout their life, while others believe in switching their companies. Although having financial security in a particular company is justifiable, people who change jobs in different companies would be more beneficial.
A long term employment provided financial stability with a specific working hours from 8 PM to 4 PM every day covers up monthly salary, education, pensions or even family health as well. For instance, in Indonesia some people tend to applied to be a civil servant. This is because the job provides them financial security and they do not have to worry about being suddenly fired and also there are retirement savings that provided by the government although worked for only one organization during all their lifetime make it becomes boring and monotonous but it is satisfy as long as such job provided enough salary to support their life.
In the other hand, changing job every four years can open doors to learn and advance in career by having some different experience in some companies that make people has a wide range of skills and become a well-rounded employee. This can increase their market value resulting in receiving offering with a higher salary and benefit can be attained especially for an ambitious employee who always seek an achievement, working for different industries with bigger challenges for them. Therefore, moving from one company to another company can lead people to a successful and secure life.
In conclusion having a lifetime employment can provide financial security but I believed that it is better to work for different companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
Suggestion: hour
...ncial stability with a specific working hours from 8 PM to 4 PM every day covers up m...
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Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...becomes boring and monotonous but it is satisfy as long as such job provided enough sal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22463768116 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7511144178 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.2759310345 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.2 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29452804846 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123697488251 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578190518559 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196298029406 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137173972599 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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