Dear Roy,
I am writing this letter in reference to the new position as Data Scientist which was allocated to me last month. I am enthusiastic for this position and will try to commit passionately to this job. In order to fulfil my duties, it would be a great help if a training can be arranged to provide me with more insights about the technology.
As you are aware that after our company successfully close the deal from the Analytic hub therefore new team was required. I have already asked for a new project hence my allocation was done in this section. Although i had a bit of understanding along with some practical knowledge but after completing knowledge transfer i felt an urge to learn more about deep learning and machine language. A hands on training from an industry expert is needed to improve my skill set for 2 weeks.
Schedule for the training can be kept after office hours. regularly two hours should be suffice to explore the theory while at the same time solving some real life problems. I can then work at my home to solve more similar problems. In this way I will be available in the morning for office work as well as can enhance my skills which will benefit me and company as well.
I hope you understand the gravity of request and grant a training for the same.
Yours Sincerely,
Gunjan PrATAP
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion and will try to commit passionately to this job. In order to fulfil my dutie...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tion was done in this section. Although i had a bit of understanding along with s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...but after completing knowledge transfer i felt an urge to learn more about deep l...
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Line 5, column 394, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A hand' or simply 'hands'?
Suggestion: A hand; Hands
...out deep learning and machine language. A hands on training from an industry expert is ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regularly
...raining can be kept after office hours. regularly two hours should be suffice to explore ...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'sufficed'?
Suggestion: sufficed
...ce hours. regularly two hours should be suffice to explore the theory while at the same...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59832635983 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56606481668 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9971892504 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5384615385 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189562902922 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681427083343 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440795051601 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111634534699 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346585636804 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.