Some people think that by paying taxes they have made enough contribution to their society, others think there are more responsibilities than paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is argued that taxpayers have contributed to the country through the tax system, so it is not necessary for them to assume other responsibilities in society.
I disagree with this idea.
If all citizens pay taxes, governments will have tax revenues that can fund some essential services. For example, the medical service can help heal the sick and ensure that all people can maintain health, while the law enforcement system can bring criminals to justice. Therefore, taxpayers’ contribution can help keep governments operating effectively, which is beneficial to social stability.
On the other hand, the alternative view is that citizens can also participate in volunteer work, and help those needy people with loving nature. These volunteers can work in nursing homes to take care of the elderly, or donate money to charities which look after the homeless. As everybody fulfills these responsibilities, it can help create an ethos of sharing and improve social solidarity.
In my opinion, taxpayers should also pay closer attention to the environmental cost of their lifestyle and make an effort to preserve the ecosystem for future generations. Motorists, for instance, turn to public transport to conserve energy and alleviate pollution, which has environmental benefits. In contrast, if taxpayers focused solely on taxpaying responsibilities and did not realize their environmental responsibility, their habits might cause damage to the environment.
To summarise, it is my personal view that apart from paying taxes, individuals should also give importance to other responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64197530864 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30100668874 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633744855967 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2063628623 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183102832162 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656612761321 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681187757807 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924733268369 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620574861105 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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