Do you agree that "Nowadays it is much easier to achieve success with help from one's family than what is like before." Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
People often possess different perspectives in the issue of whether it is easier to achieve success with help from one’s family nowadays than before. Based on my personal experience and observation of life, I believe it is indeed easier to achieve success with family help nowadays.
First of all, the living standards today has risen considerably compared to the times before. That is to say, families today are much wealthier than families in the past. For instance, before the industrial revolution, most of the people worked as farmers and struggled for livings. It is nearly impossible for f...
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