Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?

Environmentalists in the world all agree that, nowadays, rivers, lakes and other water resources are being polluted by a variety of human activities. In this essay, I will look at some main causes for this to happen, and the dire consequences would be followed if we do not maintain the preservation of the environment.

Let us start by looking at the possible reasons for the water pollution. First of all, many lakes and rivers are close to the neighborhood where a lot of daily activities are ongoing. Intentionally or unintentionally, household waste such as leftover food, plastic bags and garbage has been dumped into the water, without further consideration of the destructiveness to the atmosphere. For example, it tends to be a more convenient and faster way to get rid of a bag full of trash if we can throw it to the nearby lake, rather than having to walk all the way to the trash collection point. Secondly, because of the greedy and carelessness of the local governments, factories and other heavy industrialized companies are allowed to be built near the sea, where there are a lot of living sea creatures and the locals depends heavily on the fishing activity. In Vietnam, there was a case when a fashion factory dumped colored water, which was poisoned through the process of dyeing fabrics, into the sea, leading to the ecosystem degradation.

While some people may argue that this has adverse effects on the animal preservation, human society can also be damaged as well. As we have known, pure water is on the top list of vital needs to survive to any kind of living creatures. Fish and other sea animals may not have an ideal habitat to give birth to their offsprings. Consequently, people might lose one of the main source of food which has rich nutrients and vitamins.

In conclusion, there are many factors which can affect our water resources such as human destructive behaviors and the act of the government. If we do not start to do something about it, it will exert negative impacts on the existence of the marine life and our life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79281767956 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87976900174 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582872928177 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.4127650416 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.928571429 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239268045035 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729890500279 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446706877637 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133910075156 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042497322165 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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