The bar graph depicts the information about the predicted sales of Jeans for two companies for future in turkey.
At the first glance,it is clearly seen that, the maximum number of sales of Jeans for jack and jones company will be 450 thousands of pairs and the minimum number of sales of jean's for mango company would be 100 thousand of pairs furthermore the number of sales of jeans for both companies predicted to be same in march andApril respectively Moreover, there will be a 100 number difference between the sales of jeans for same company in April and june.
Shifting towards remaining information, in December, the sales of Jeans for jack and jones be double as compared to april month. Adding to this,the sales of jeans and Jones company will be same in September and October month
Overall,the highest sales of jeans for jack and jones company will be in december month and the lowest number of sales of jeans for mango company would be february month.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41942137158 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.781303158 43.030603864 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.0 112.824112599 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.0 22.9334400587 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262119401786 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195098039567 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727977005066 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207284235096 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578174786741 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 13.2329268293 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.77 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.