To be a part of the community one has to know the value of unity and brotherhood among them. It is argued that children should be taught by their elders that how to become a good member of society. However, others believe that the best place to learn these values is the school. This essay will discuss both these views in detail.
To begin with, parents play vital role in the life of their children. Child is not that mature enough that they know what is good or bad for them and their society. They are sensitive and learn from seeing their elders and try to copy these things in their life. Parents should apply some things on theirselves like to respect every citizen of the nation and not to use abusive language and so on in front of the children as it helps to the make the positive mindset of the children and they will try to do that as well in their life. More and more, parents should spent more time with their parents and look after their activities and take them to some social events where one can learn the values of living in the society.
On the other hand, other section of society ponder that institute is the place where children can learn moral values to live in society. As child from every section and religion come to school for education and they may help them to learn the values of brotherhood and unity which is the key to live and make better society. Moreover, in school children can learn the rules and regulations which helps in the growth of a good citizen. If one gets to know about their fundamental duties then it will definately lead them to become a good member of society.
In conclusion, for the betterment of society it is the duty of both parents and school that they taught children the moral values which are needed to be a better citizen and make society to be free from bad aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, as to, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42772861357 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13056147751 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427728613569 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4875176869 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.214285714 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2142857143 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287871349206 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116393536357 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695986215089 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200385636196 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107225306105 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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