Dear Manager,
I am writing to express my disappointment the standards of hygiene maintained in the changing rooms of your sports center.
I am a fitness enthusiast and joined your sports center a few years ago. Dedication of the cleaning staff in maintaining a clean facility has always impressed me. However, lately, I noticed that the rooms are not disinfected and the room smells disgusting. I understand that the number members in the center has grown drastically and it is daunting to schedule a regular cleaning task. I did bring this to the notice of president during the last general body meeting and it was agreed that the members will not use the changing facilities for half an hour in the morning, after noon, and session to carry out the routine task.
It would be great if you could put notices outside the changing rooms about the timing cleaning schedule, hire more cleaning staff so that the task is distributed. In addition, this will also ensure that the members are aware of the schedule and the staff can accomplish the work in less than thirty minutes.
Looking forward to your response and a well maintained sports center in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Rajie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... task. It would be great if you could put notices outside the changing rooms a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92647058824 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63046267984 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3240623535 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151235737564 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608758337407 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522094078342 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102899271616 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376331319387 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.