Vegetarianism is a more ethical practice than eating meat. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Vegetarianism has become increasingly popular in recent times. People often choose to become vegetarian because it is considered to be more ethical than being a meat eater. This essay will discuss the reasons why vegetarian is in fact a much more ethical eating practice when compared to eating meat.
Vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat because it does not harm animals. Clearly, harming animals cause suffering, which is unethical. For example, millions of chickens are killed each day for human consumption. Vegetarians do not participate in the killing of animals, which is a much more ethical practice than eating meat.
Vegetarianism is also much more ethical than eating meat because its impact on the environment is far less. Growing vegetables is good for the environment, whereas farming animals impacts the environment. Beef cattle, for instance, destroy top soil and damage the atmosphere. Vegetarianism is a more ethical practice because it does not harm the natural world.
This essay discussed why vegetarianism is more ethical than eating meat because it does not harm animals and it does not damage the environment.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 41.998997996 21% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 181.0 315.596192385 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38121546961 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90958341536 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513812154696 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2601739679 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.1666666667 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401276310594 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177767580331 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.152706439793 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285428065724 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476453449978 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.33 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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