Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
It is undeniable fact in past that there are many jobs or positions in any sector for boys only and no girls are allowed. Now, we have come to a point in the world where we hardly see "Work for Men only" boards in any industry or corporation. While it may be true some years back, it isn't true anymore.
We all have heard of Mountaineering and Trekking activities. A few decades ago, only men could be seen summiting the mountains. But now we do not any gender particularity in any of the hiking activities. Arunima Simha, from India, is a lady who summited the Mount Everest and returned safely. She didn't just simply mount the peak with usual pair of legs, she is amputed with no legs since childhood. Thus, she became the first amputed lady to summit the peak of the world. She is the true inspiration for many of the girls. With her inspiration, i have seen a young girl less whose age is than 20 years have summited the peak. This story of Arunmina Simha made belive that women could perform any activity equal with men without any doubts. But some might raise a question that the sherpa who helped the Arunima Simha is man and without his support she couldn't possibly achieve the greatness. It is true that Sherpa is man, but you should also note that most of the persons who hike the peaks accompany a Sherpa with them. And these persons include both Men and Women.
My friend who studied at IIT Kharagpur from India, bagged an offer from Petroleum company. There is a myth in that university that only men will be consideed that position as it requires lot of physicalstrength. It has araised beacuse only men have been selected in past 10 years. But last year she broke the myth and probed that it is not about men or women but is about the
It is also about the will or love to perform any task that defines whether a men or women is suited for any task. And fitness also pays important role for any gender to accustom to any physical task.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... not about men or women but is about the It is also about the will or love to per...
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Message: 'man' is the singular form of 'men'. Consider using 'man'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so, thus, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44198895028 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3724312731 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53591160221 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0989449986 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727330210852 0.243740707755 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219831463252 0.0831039109588 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443420329437 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0422980825693 0.150359130593 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291055372552 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 12.1639044944 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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