" Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. "
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
Many think that men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. While it may sound intriguing, a closer inspection of the fact reveals that despite of their physical discrepancy, they are more likely to be equally suited for all the tasks.
There was a time when the fact - women do not equal to men in all kinds of work - was used as an aphorism. But with the passage of time, this maxim has rather became obsolete. Instead, women have been proving themselves in all spheres and working as the best counterpart of men. Now-a-days women is employed in all kinds of job - teaching, scientist, doctor, engineer, labor, stock broker, businessperson - and established their position in the society. For example, even at present times, women are participating in the army alongside with men while in the past, they were circumvented in the less assiduous working sector like agriculture and housekeeping. All these advancements are not only demonstrating their ability but also are proliferating the modern world.
Perhaps, in some cases, women can do better job than men, i.e. they are well-known for multi-tasking. It is scientifically proven that, women can perform better than men when it comes about multi-tasking. For example, our mothers cook, look after children, washing the dishes, all performing at a time. This inherent quality of women has rather degrade's men's contribution in such cases. Besides, in child raising, it behooves upon women most in case of upbringing of a baby because a child is more attached to its mother from birth. In this case, I would perhaps declare that men can not even compete with women.
Nevertheless, sometimes the physical trait of women prevents them from doing so much ponderous work comparing with men. To illustrate, during the pregnancy period, women are prohibited from doing any heavy work since such activity can be detrimental to the embryo's growth. Therefore, they have to keep themselves away from these activities for the sake of the child's benefit. However, this is totally an exceptional case, and for this pregnant women are considered for maternal leave for months according to the law that differs from one country to another.
To encapsulate the above mentioned ideas, women should never be underestimated for their so called ''weak'' physical structure. Rather they are the ones, who, therefore can challenge men in everything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... passage of time, this maxim has rather became obsolete. Instead, women have been prov...
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Line 13, column 258, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'embryos'' or 'embryo's'?
Suggestion: embryos'; embryo's
...such activity can be detrimental to the embryos growth. Therefore, they have to keep th...
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Line 17, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...heir so called weak physical structure. Rather they are the ones, who, therefore can c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 396.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18939393939 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.856832818 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7789293125 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213308043153 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748902306601 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818193848427 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141362950995 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831057163176 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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