Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my disappointment in the shipping services that I availed from your company on June 1, 2019. The shipment was from Bangalore to Ontario and the consignment number is A0056754.
Let me explain the reasons for my dissatisfaction in your service. Insufficient packaging damaged some electrical appliances that were a part of the consignment. Firstly, the compressor of my Samsung refrigerator model 5473 has broken and the fridge is not functional. Secondly, the motherboard of my Whirlpool washing machine model 7893 has a short circuit and the buttons are not operational. Delayed delivery of the consignment. Initially, the estimated delivery date that was provided to me was July 5, 2019. However, it was delivered only on July 30, 2019 after incessant followups over phone. It has has created a great deal of inconvenience for me to store the groceries and do the laundry without these appliances.
Would you kindly arrange for the repair or the replacement of the appliances as detailed in the transit insurance that I purchased from your company. I would appreciate if you could email the insurance agent in Ontario and send a copy of the email to my email address worker@gmail.com
Looking forward to a prompt response and a replacement of the appliances at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Rajie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 603, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: has
...fter incessant followups over phone. It has has created a great deal of inconvenience f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16742081448 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16083348626 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601809954751 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4462922559 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8461538462 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105657838618 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033252220789 0.0766984524023 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388139862492 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552404120019 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432103341695 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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