Is always telling the truth the most important consideration in relationships?
Of course, being honest is a significant factor needs to be considered in our relationships. I believe honesty is one of the important aspects of relationships, not the most important one, because of these reasons.
By being honest, people can trust each other. if one can not trust the other one this can cause many problems. For example when I was in high school, I had a girlfriend who would usually lied about little things like when I asked her why she had not arrived on time on our appointment she lied to me that she was stuck in a traffic jam instead of telling me the truth that she was buying stuff for herself in a shopping mall that I found later. Although These kind of lies were little, they were continuously diminishing my trust in her, so someday we were arguing whether or not she was cheating on me and she was trying to convince me she was not cheating but I could not trust her and I decided to end that relationship. However, It was possible that she was not betraying me and I made a decision on a wrong fact and who knows maybe we could be one of the happiest couples in the world. So dishonesty can force you to make a decision that may be wrong and ruin your relationship.
on the other hand, I want to mention something as important as honesty which is respecting each other. If you do not respect the other one it can encourage the other one to be disrespectful to you too. For example, when I was in a coffee shop, I ordered a mocha without the cream on it. But unfortunately, the waiter brought me a cup of mocha with the cream. I was really bored that day and I could not bear this kind of misunderstanding that day so I told him some bad things and he got angry and told me bad things in return and asked me to quit the coffee shop not only I got stressed but also I could not drink my mocha. It could have been much better if I just would have asked him to bring me another mocha. So it’s better to respect to maintain a relationship without the stress.
There are many factors that influence the relationship but I think these two are the significant ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...ng honest, people can trust each other. if one can not trust the other one this ca...
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Line 2, column 46, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng honest, people can trust each other. if one can not trust the other one this ca...
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Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing stuff for herself in a shopping mall that I found later. Although These kind ...
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Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ping mall that I found later. Although These kind of lies were little, they were continuo...
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Line 2, column 566, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...rust in her, so someday we were arguing whether or not she was cheating on me and she was tryi...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...be wrong and ruin your relationship. on the other hand, I want to mention somet...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...honesty which is respecting each other. If you do not respect the other one it can...
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Line 4, column 667, Rule ID: IF_WOULD_HAVE_VBN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'had asked'?
Suggestion: had asked
...t could have been much better if I just would have asked him to bring me another mocha. So it&ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, for example, i think, kind of, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.2864321608 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60692165284 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477386934673 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0485315569 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0844438127003 0.236089414692 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308681897434 0.076458572812 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448515071517 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657476193653 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330209594971 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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