You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
• Explain when and how long you will be in town.
• Ask whether you can stay at their home.
• Offer to pay for yourself
Dear Mohammad,
I hope you are doing great. Actually I have a good news for you. Which is that I am planning to make a short visit to the London in specific where you live. Furthermore it will be on 15th of October exactly the beginning of next week. I will stay there for 10 days.
In order to that, I am asking you, could you please discuss with your family my interest to stay into your home that period? Honestly this is my first time visiting this city, and I find it difficult for me to rent a room alone. Please try to solve this dilemma for me. I will be appreciated.
On other hand, I am all ready to pay for myself, I do not mind at all. So consider that with no further discussion needed, if you and your family have been agreed.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Best Regard,
Doaa.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mohammad, I hope you are doing great. Actually I h...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...pe you are doing great. Actually I have a good news for you. Which is that I am planning to...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t. Actually I have a good news for you. Which is that I am planning to make a short v...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
... the London in specific where you live. Furthermore it will be on 15th of October exactly t...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 57, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...o hearing from you as soon as possible. Best Regard, Doaa.
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you as soon as possible. Best Regard, Doaa.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, honestly, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 675.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.21875 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22478053693 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68125 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.115177337 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 51.9230769231 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3076923077 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33265483953 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101717871647 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724914324853 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179456952217 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066457486665 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.