The following opinion was provided in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine:
“Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
The author here states an argument that the space probes and satellite projects which are carried out should prefer unamanned programs and not manned flights. The author suggets that the space flights involving men and women into space are more costly and also dangerous to their lives. It also suggest that the information which is gathered from the unmanned space flights has been useful. Hence author suggests unmanned space flights over manned space flights.
As, the passage only suggests about the manned space flights being costly and no information about the cost of unmanned space flights we can not say that the unmanned space flights would be economically beneficient to us. Also, the success rate of unmanned space flights over mannned flights can also be a cruicial point for analyzing the argument.
The argument further says about the useful information received from unmanned space flights but the information whoich could be gathered by manned space can be more or less valuable. Hence no relevant comparision is seen in terms of the quality of information. It can also happen that the information which can be gathered by a human can not be gathered by unmanned space flights.
However, about the risk of sending men and women is always present in manned space flights as seen before in history. The loss of life can never be compensated by money. Hence the manned space flights are always on the risk of lives of the men and women sent.
But on the contrary to this there is no argument suggesting the safety measures taken in manned space flights which may suggest that the chances of lives of men and women could be higher or lower. Therefore, more safety measure can be less dangerous to their lives.
Hence, the argument can be concluded as whether it is benficient to invest in unmanned space flights and not in manned space flights. Is the quality of information gathered from both is same or not. Are the safety measures enough for reducing risk of lives. Hence, answers to above can resolve and a more clear view on this can be concluded.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 353 350
No. of Characters: 1684 1500
No. of Different Words: 137 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.335 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.771 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.365 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.611 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.132 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.42 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.646 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.159 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'suggests'?
Suggestion: suggests
... also dangerous to their lives. It also suggest that the information which is gathered ...
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Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...unmanned space flights has been useful. Hence author suggests unmanned space flights ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nned space flights would be economically beneficient to us. Also, the success rat...
^^
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ned space can be more or less valuable. Hence no relevant comparision is seen in term...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 171, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...life can never be compensated by money. Hence the manned space flights are always on ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he contrary to this there is no argument suggesting the safety measures taken in ...
^^
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ances of lives of men and women could be higher or lower. Therefore, more safety...
^^
Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld be higher or lower. Therefore, more safety measure can be less dangerous to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, more or less, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 353.0 441.139720559 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86685552408 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41207775092 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 204.123752495 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396600566572 0.468620217663 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 534.6 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6150474597 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4444444444 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 23.324526521 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.70786347227 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243111054267 0.218282227539 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10211915969 0.0743258471296 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085215210617 0.0701772020484 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156473304133 0.128457276422 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760068757242 0.0628817314937 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.32208582834 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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