Dear Annie,
I hope you are doing good and happy with your new job. We had lots of fun at Neha's 20th Birthday party. Your absence was felt and we all missed you. I hope you will be able to make up to Soha's house warming party next week.
Also, I had borrowed a pair of earrings from you for the party last week. They were orange in colour with dangling rings on it. I had taken care of them and ensured that nothing happens to it. But unfortunately, while I was dancing at the party, one of them fell down and by the time I could pick it up someone stamped and it broke. I am extremely sorry for this. I know it must have been quite precious to you. The very next day I looked into some shops which had similar designs and found one from the same brand but in a darker shade of red. I hope this will compensate for my mistake and I hope you will forgive me this time.
I again apologize for breaking your earing.
Hoping for your reply,
yours lovingly,
Amy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: orange
... you for the party last week. They were orange in colour with dangling rings on it. I had taken ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 786.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15873015873 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00747462464 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2380589431 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.1428571429 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221373038405 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786353421934 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644935808867 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133675557477 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314143866854 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 8.37731958763 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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