A healthy diet is more important for keeping fit than exercise. To what extent do you agree with this statement? What's your opinion?
Our society has been witnessing the contradictory views regarding whether a healthy diet is more effective for keeping fit than exercise. Some people claim that exercise is much better while others disagree. From my observation, the positive influences of exercise outweigh a healthy diet. My reasons and examples are given below.
At the outset, there are multifarious benefits of doing exercise, the most conspicuous one lies in the fact that exercise burn calories which can not only consume fat in the human body but also shape muscle line. Besides, exercise can enhance the flexibility of body and bones. To further support this statement, the latest Oxford research reveals that 90% of the population in the UK prefer to keep fit by doing exercise.
However, there are several pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential merits of doing exercise. Firstly, the most preponderant one is that exercise may cause injury of the body. Secondly, exercise makes people feel exhausted. Lastly, according to a report from the New York Times 2018, edition, scientific results show that some people can not lose weight by doing exercise due to genetic reasons.
As discussed above, one can conclude that exercise has benefited keeping fit in numerous ways from burning calories, consuming fat in the human body, shaping muscle line and whatnot. Nevertheless, we cannot oblivious to some likely demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30357142857 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6423744733 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647321428571 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1967705756 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3846153846 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161219599489 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543876388907 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777102435127 0.071462118173 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975381056738 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589985713731 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 55.0591133005 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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