Ever since his evolution on this planet, human being is known as the most intelligent animal. Eventually, man’s propensity turned towards creating his own world in this world, namely society- made himself called as a social animal. Since than, many countries, are being ruled by thousands of rulers introducing newer and evolutionary aspects into their respective societies. Such new aspects or characteristics were carved in the histories, man decided to materialize them, leading him to include their lifestyles of their ages in their architectures. Sometimes, even inducing new architectural style as a symbol that gives the ambiance their culture for the people who visit the place and know it’s rules and regulations and live it. Hence, I agree that one must study the main cites in order to get to know the characteristics of that particular society.
The ancient man started this ‘trend’ of carrying on the culture or the practices to the next generation by putting them on his artificial products. This trend was carried on by the rulers. Take for example the ancient Hoysala Empire. The beautiful temples like Virupaksha, in which the practices of the denizens during those times are beautifully carved. Some of the substantiations are being used as a prototypes in the contemporary age as a result of generations carrying on that practice. For an instance, the practice of court and the declaration of judgment by the judge are being derived from the ancient culture itself. These ancient practices are visibly available to see in those important cites of society.
Moreover, the important places of a place is where most of the people of the visit. From where an outside might get an idea of the major aspects of that place. To exemplify this statement, we can consider the very beautiful Golden temple at Amritsar of Punjab. The community of Sikhs, known for their kind and helping nature as well as their spartan personalities by knowing that a Sikh must always carry a sword to protect the people and the turban on head symbolizing some other positive aspect. These can be tacitly understood if one studies the major cites of that particular society.
However, one can also argue that they can follow the guidelines written by some author to survive in that particular society. But, According to me, the author of that particular book must have gone to explore the major cites of that society. Some of the untouched aspects by that author should be learnt too by one, in order to survive in that society in a viable manner.
In a nutshell, By using the above mentioned substantiations we can say clearly that man has to touch and explore the important aspects as well as the man made locations of that particular society, in order to get to know fully understand it’s characteristics.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04690831557 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90720861325 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 759.6 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1564041841 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.590909091 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3181818182 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128114167103 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397138575776 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382316037549 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692026416442 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196798250061 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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