Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Having a good realationship between people is an often debated topic. Some believe telling the truth is the most important factor to have any kinds of relationship among people. As a matter of fact, if each person tell the truth about different situations to specific persons who are related to that, everything goes to its' right direction that must be gone. personally, i agree with this opinion, and i think it has a so positive effects on personal's life and whole society. Looking at this consequences can help us to understand how can it guides people to make right decision in every aspects of their lives.
First of all, you should think about this fact that if you lie in your relationship, what happens after that?. Probably, you should lie more than one to cover your first thing you said. it will continue until you make a mistake. Then you can't cover anymore and you should confess, i was a liar. this situation may destroy your relationship with people who interfere with this. In addition to that, you feel sorry for what you did and there is no way to rebuild this relationship.
Secondly, when you adopt with not telling the truth, after a while, you think it's ok and you start to tell another lie in your all relationships. The result is you are another person and you ready for doing what you like without any fear about this fact that you were a guilty person.For example, you make a mistake in your work and manager asks you to what's going on. you lie and everything is going to be okay. you learn how can decieve people and if you are in another position, definetly you are a better liar and you can cover your fault professionally. So you are not the same person you were.
In conclusion, we see some affect of not telling the truth in our own manner and effectiveness of doing that in destroying our relationships. if all people tell the truth in any relationship, i think we have a better life in this world and by doing this, we respect to ourseleves firstly and after that, we respect for others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55464480874 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57531452763 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505464480874 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.042738084 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6111111111 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27777777778 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134154875628 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569673381217 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102333979889 0.0737576698707 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107841607989 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761884679695 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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