Being a celebrity – such as a famous star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits
Do you think that being celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
In 21st century everybody wants to become famous but having celebrity status, for example being a movie star or a sportsman not just brings advantages but also comes with difficulties. This essay discusses merits and demerits of being a popular personality and will conclude which outweighs the other.
First of all, being a famous personality means the person is always in high demand. Enormous wealth creation opportunity is the biggest advantage of this. Movie stars and sports persons can enjoy the lavish lifestyle and can experience all the luxury. For example, many sportsmen endorse different brands and often earn contracts with high monetary value. Additionally, attaining celebrity status and its monetary aspect would also make them worry free on managing their future expenses. Thus, highly regarded and abundantly rewarded lifestyle are the supreme benefits of being a celebrity.
However, the reverse is also true. Many times these celebrities have to pay high price to stay on top. They have to sacrifice plenty of hours and personal life and put extra efforts to keep achieving their goals to be in public eye. To illustrate, many cricketers have to follow strict diet to stay fit and often have to let go precious hours with their family. Moreover, they are always scrutinized by their fans and media and receive negative feedbacks. These sometimes create stressful moments for them resulting in adverse effects on their life.
In conclusion, having a celebrity status is everyone’s dream as it not only gives you fame but also enables to enjoy treats what only money can buy. Conversely, there are a plethora of factors which can pose challenges to the rewarding lifestyle. I personally believe that difficulties brought by celebrity status outpaces advantages of it as one stays under constant pressure to perform well and there is no margin of error which hinders to enjoy innocent moments of the life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to enjoy innocent moments of the life.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21794871795 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68343317589 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5945983354 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193977153781 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552708862704 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570919653438 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122600877995 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595753306689 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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