Write a letter to the organizer who booked hotel for you.
Meeting details.
What u didn’t like about the hotel
What you want organizer to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the hotel room booked for me while I was on an official trip.
I had travelled to Mumbai last week and the hotel ‘Apsara’ in Juhu beach, room number 202 was allotted for my stay. I had stayed there for couple of days, from 1st July to 3rd of July, as my meeting got extended for one additional day.
Although the hotel looks quite decent, but the staff over there where lacking courtesy and one of them had almost misbehaved with me over an insignificant issue. As the situation unfolds, I had ordered for cheese corn soup instead the one served to me was having lettuce in addition, to which I am allergic. When I raised an alarm for wrong serving the arrogant waiter argued that I requested for the same and they have served correctly.
I would like you to acknowledge this incident and have a word with the owner of the hotel. Since, our organization is a premium customer for that hotel I hope if you talk with the concerned person, with relevant points, then it will leave an impact and no one from our company would have to undergo such scenario again.
I anticipate to listen positively from you.
Yours faithfully,
ABCX
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| 2021-01-23 | Jay Thakkar | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m number 202 was allotted for my stay. I had stayed there for couple of days, fr...
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Line 7, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he same and they have served correctly. I would like you to acknowledge this inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64651162791 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56786312688 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637209302326 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0309004106 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217041308194 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805020518122 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534488055958 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121663491642 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472096723865 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.