Dear Sir / Madam,
With reference to the Economics times newspaper classified advertise on 17 Jun 2019, reference number INC-5486. I would like to fill the position of French and English language teacher in your coaching institute.
I complete my French and English language degree in LSM (London school of management) in 2014 and having good strength and command on my qualification language. I believe, teaching student is my passion because most of the time I am spending my time in DPS (Delhi public school). As I am learning 7th grade student as a 2nd language French.
As far as you know about my teaching background I would be appreciate if you call me for a one day session in your institute to see my knowledge and experience. My working hours in DPS from Monday to Friday 6 Am to 1 PM. And after that I am giving private tutor to my society students. As you are looking for a coacher from 9 to 10PM which is really suitable timing for me. Because I finish my dinner and chore before 8 O’clock and I’m single independent women.
Hereby I’m attaching my LSE institute certificate for your reference with the IELTS certified coaching certificate as well. Hope this would be enough quality which I achieved being a teacher.
Looking forward to hearing form your end as early as possible.
Your faithfully,
Budebs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir / Madam, With reference to the Economics times ne...
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...d command on my qualification language. I believe, teaching student is my passion...
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...ality which I achieved being a teacher. Looking forward to hearing form your end...
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... early as possible. Your faithfully, Budebs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, you know, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78904146119 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0648989059 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150109066519 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500098221526 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631875409857 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0713103691567 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517556347373 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.