Technology has experienced boom in 20th century. Advancement of technology unables us living life which is completely differentthan five decades ago.Thise eassy discus the improvement technology impose adverse effects to the community and family.
To begin with, technology has bring a lot of change in the people's day to day activities.
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Furious technological
Furious technological development has completely changed the way of living of modern children,these days they have plenty of gadgets where they spend most of the time though it has some positive as well as negative effects in their lives .
Firstly considering, the positive sides children have been familiar with the technology from their childhood,once they reach their adulthood they become experts in using it, which helps them not only in their studies but also in jobs because at the present everything is based on technology and those people who have better technological skills are the primary preference of employers.
On the other hand, looking at negative sides nowadays children are less involved in plying physical games which causes many health issues like obesity and mental weakness whereas in the past time children were much physically and mentally fit due to playing excessive outdoor games which helped them to be more social with their friends but at present many children love to live inside the room and keep themselves busy in using social networks,playing games as well as in watching movies due to this self involvement they start avoiding their friends and family members so it is parents responsibility to guide their children before it becomes worst to handle.
In conclusion,technological development is enormously beneficial for children but excessive use can make them self involved person so guidance is required in there early age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 1.0 24.0651302605 4% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 41.998997996 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 292.0 1615.20841683 18% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 51.0 315.596192385 16% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72549019608 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.67234511778 4.20363070211 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1936114622 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 40.0 176.041082164 23% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.78431372549 0.561755894193 140% => OK
syllable_count: 96.3 506.74238477 19% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.973953033 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155839040921 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863267436438 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427373005214 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105864494902 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422632891455 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.67 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 78.4519038076 25% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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