At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage?
Nowadays, the population is one of the crucial factor for economic development of the nation.In some countries ,the community of younger people is larger than older people.There is no doubt about that due to more young adults the country has more merits than demerits.
To begin with, there are several benifit of having more young people. The young people are more productive than old people. Also they are healthier . So, production companies or any industries have no difficulty to find best talent. For example , India has many educated and never short of talented people in companies. Moreover, advantage like having larger community of younger people is benificial to bring necessary changes in the thinking of the nation.This helps the nation to grow and develop on the global stage. Apart from this, young people also healthconcious. So, they spread the importance of fitness in the life and encourage other people to be healthier.
Furthermore, young adults have better knowledge of ongoing technology .so they can use updated technology platform to develop the country. Apart from this, youth have an ability to doing hardwork. So with the help of hardworking nature of youth and updated technology , it can possible to faster growth of the nation.
On the flip side, due to the higher population of young youth, it can cause the unemployment rate. Also the rise of sharp population growth. Apart from this due to higher amount of youth ,it can cause the problem in the healthcare services because government can not afford medical health facilities of higher amount of people .Also, youth adults, who have not experienced in the all aspects of life.so they can make many mistakes in different part of life.For example ,lack of experience the professionalism decrease and it can affect the productiveness of the company.
To conclude, it is clear that countries having large number of young adults than the old age people , it can help the economic development of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, for example, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14769230769 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74985795219 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529230769231 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.060899425 49.4020404114 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 104.5625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528559574216 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469162100039 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909434147229 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369209930696 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.