Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
It is true that childhood obesity becomes a serious problem in many places in the world. although it caused many negative effects, we still have some possible solutions to solve this problem.
Children are getting fat by several factors. Many young people nowadays tend to consume a large amount of junk food, for example hamburger, chips and sugary soft drinks. Beside that, spent too much time on playing computer games or surfing the internet rather than take part in outdoor activities or doing sport also contributes to the obesity problem.
Keeping all that habits can lead to a lot of negative impact on future. Firstly, children overweight can have higher risk of diseases than normal people like diabetes, heart diseases or cancer. Secondly, they might feel uncomfortable or self-conscious in communications and try to avoid taking part in social activities. Finally, getting fat will be a burden not only for their family but also for the hospital and social in the future.
From a personal point of view, it is parent’s responsibility to keep fit their children. On the one hand, they can control children’s diet and give them healthy foods like vegetables and fruits. On the other hand, parent should ensure that they have time to take regular excercise, encourage their child to take part in some outdoor activities like picnic, hanging out with friends and doing sports.
In conclusion, obesity can caused a lot of negative influence on children’s life, so it is very important to cut their effect by practical actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15354330709 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77876068473 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4132014512 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.692307692 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1772164489 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674989998751 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116836703619 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127470286279 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168429023275 0.056905535591 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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