You have given a renovation contract of your home to a builder but you are dissatisfied with the builder's work
Write a letter to the builder. In your letter
-about the things the builder has not done well
-the problems you are facing as a result
-what you want the builder to do
Dear Mr.Mehta,
I am writing this letter regarding my dissatisfaction for the work you have done at my place. A one month contract was signed for the renovation of my house with you, which has ended with a huge disappointment. There are numerous defects that I can count
for your notice.
Firstly, the tiles used for flooring are slippery which can cause harm to any of my family members. Additionally, moping and
cleaning on the floor is also difficult as water does not get wiped off easily. Secondly, almost all the door locks are dis-functional,
we are unable to clock the doors from inside, moreover, the lobby door has been jammed. Next, the wood used for the furniture work is of degrading value, the colour looks pale and it has some cracks also.
Considering, the problems we are facing because of non-efficient work done by you, I request you to take some measure to resolve them.
Primarily, replace the floor tiles with some tough and stable marble. In addition, send some workers to fix the doorknobs, as
they are causing high inconvenience. Also, provide us with furniture with better wood quality, especially the chairs.
I look forward to the immediate actions and resolution.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhjot Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Mehta
Dear Mr.Mehta, I am writing this letter regarding ...
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Line 8, column 200, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...olour looks pale and it has some cracks also. Considering, the problems we are fa...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05797101449 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79894893639 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68115942029 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3482066341 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5384615385 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155560995597 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496341229428 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595353367451 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0503026680838 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723341281954 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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