The two maps illustrate the ways to approach City Hospital in 2007 and in 2010. In 2007, the hospital road, which connected the city road and the ring road, had 3 bus stops on either side of the road. There was a common car park for both the staff and the public on the east side of the hospital road.
Significant changes were seen in 2010. Firstly, the small bus stops were demolished and a single large bus station was constructed towards the west of the hospital road. Secondly, the common car park was converted into an exclusive space for staff to park their vehicles and a new separate public car park was made on the eastern side of the city hospital. Lastly, there were two roundabouts built on either end of the hospital road, one at its intersection with the ring road and the other with the city road; with both of them having an entrance to the bus station.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
... the city road and the ring road, had 3 bus stops on either side of the road. There...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 713.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25784727349 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496894409938 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1432272378 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203262617261 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1172011405 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921618939245 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194542776882 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813829281664 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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