Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to appreciate the efforts done by your hotel employee Kishan on Sunday 07 2019.
Actually, I was in the city for a business meeting to promote my company's products and services and I enjoyed the stay in your hotel park plaza located in downtown, Toronto. I was in so hurry that while checking out the room I forgot my passport on the table aligned next to the bed and left the for the airport to take my return flight.
At the entrance of the airport, I realized that I do not have my passport in my bag. I recalled that I missed the passport in the hotel room, I became really worried that I will not be able to take my flight today and nobody can help me in this situation check-in process was about to close.
All of sudden, I remembered that I have your staff member's phone in my last dialed list. I immediately called him, for my surprise he was on the way to the airport to return my passport. I really felt blessed that he saved my time and money at that moment.
I want you to promote him at the next level for his witty and helpful nature, in addition to this, I want to reward him some cash prize to please share his bank details.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by your hotel employee Kishan on Sunday 07 2019. Actually, I was in the city ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d my time and money at that moment. I want you to promote him at the next lev...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ze to please share his bank details. I look forward to hearing from you at you...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, really, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28333333333 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30337916018 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570833333333 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9828781381 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102785848935 0.216113520407 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394441770573 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356113072509 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590788730727 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298894476793 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.