A staff member of a hotel has helped you in a difficult situation. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.What was the problem?What has happened?What should be done by the manager?

Essay topics:

A staff member of a hotel has helped you in a difficult situation. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
What was the problem?
What has happened?
What should be done by the manager?

Dear sir,

I am writing to express my gratitude for the assistance received by one of your employees, during my recent visit to your hotel.

Last Friday, I have had dinner out with my family, in your restaurant. The meal was scrumptious but, we had trouble with our car, afterward. Though the car has broken down in the hotel car parking, we were unable to find the exact cause for the same.

Nevertheless, all of us were stood in front of the hotel gate to find a cab, but could not find the one due to the bad weather. Fortunately, one of your staff members, Andrew, suddenly come to us and listen to our situation. He has called 24-hour roadside assistance to repair our car and give shelter to my family members for a little time in the hotel. Within a few minutes, we got our car repaired, however, we could not find Andrew again in the hotel to pay our regards.

Nonetheless, I would solely request you to appreciate him for his care towards the customers. He was the only person who helped us out from the panic situation. Kindly send me the contact details of him so that I would be able to show my gratitude personally.

Anxiously looking for your response.

Yours faithfully,
Mathew Woods

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am writing to express my gratitude for...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for your response. Yours faithfully, Mathew Woods
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, nevertheless, nonetheless, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60091743119 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55250808694 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610091743119 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4920285491 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1538461538 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109858716309 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03752070749 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268685329686 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540880831649 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031417523658 0.0580467560999 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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