You need to take leave from your work of over one month for personal reasons.
Write a letter to your boss. In your letter:
Explain the reason for the leave and the length of leave you need.
How you will keep up-to-date while you are away
Suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to request you for granting me a leave of over a month owing to some private reason.
The reason behind taking a leave is quite interesting. I am going to my native country for getting married. My parents have fixed the date of marriage and they prepared everything. Therefore, I need a leave of about seven weeks to enjoy the ceremony as it is my special occasion. I have to get my dress ready beforehand, so I need to go there a week before.
I know my job is demanding. Because of this, I have already accomplished my pending assignments and meetings. I will join our official webinars regularly to stay updated. Not only this, but I will also take every updation from my colleagues on the phone related to the workplace. Hence, my leave will not become burdensome to you.
Nonetheless, I would suggest you to consult Mr.Wimson Woods, if you need any query about my submitted assignments as I will give my locker keys to him. He will also make-up my absence by doing my work. Kindly grant my leave as soon as possible.
Looking forward for a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Thomson Vig
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Wimson
...less, I would suggest you to consult Mr.Wimson Woods, if you need any query about my s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, nonetheless, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71844660194 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68695349912 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645631067961 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2057976865 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.75 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.375 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288002780154 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930583590091 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779869202972 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168331940487 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681771913164 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.